Feedback and Assessment Task

Read a sample essay accompanied by my comments very attentively. Some of these comments follow effective EDI practices, while others do not. Your task is to examine the feedback carefully and respond to the following:

1. Analyse the comments

• Identify which comments are effective and explain why.
• Identify which comments are ineffective or unhelpful, and explain what makes them less effective.
• Consider both EDI principles and general feedback quality (clarity, tone, specificity, usefulness, actionability, fairness, inclusiveness, etc.).

 2. Use a Feedback Profiling Tool
Apply a feedback-profiling tool to describe where the existing feedback aligns with good feedback practices. For every comment you consider ineffective or incomplete, rewrite it so that it is clearer, more useful, more inclusive, and more aligned with effective feedback principles.

3. Post your response
Please upload your full analysis and revised comments below.